Writing

By Anonymous -
I.A.L.T Write an effective bit of persuasive writing.

 What? In 2018 Oaklands school is going to be redesigned and the kids are going to have a chance to put their ideas forward.

 So What? What I have enjoyed doing is drawing my designs and what I thought we could do was have honeycomb shelves and a better swimming pool.

 Now What? What I want to do next is draw my designs better.

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